I am guessing that this is not finished because of all the grey boxes at the end. I think you are not using Prezi to itself fullest extent. You need to add in more features especially images and other evidence to back up what you are saying. Don't have large blocks or text 0 break them up and illustrate each point you are making (photo, screen grabs, short video clip etc - stage them if you don't have evidence) You say that you got feedback that was helpfully but you don' say what it was enough and you need to give more examples of the changes you made as a result of feedback. It is good that you have included the ancillaries as well but develop more. Explain why feedback is so important.
I am guessing that this is not finished because of all the grey boxes at the end. I think you are not using Prezi to itself fullest extent. You need to add in more features especially images and other evidence to back up what you are saying. Don't have large blocks or text 0 break them up and illustrate each point you are making (photo, screen grabs, short video clip etc - stage them if you don't have evidence) You say that you got feedback that was helpfully but you don' say what it was enough and you need to give more examples of the changes you made as a result of feedback. It is good that you have included the ancillaries as well but develop more. Explain why feedback is so important.
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